Today I commented on Giovanni blog post about Fishy False teeth.
First, I said my greetings to him. Talofa Lava Giovanni
Next, I said my name and my class name. My name is Hector and I am from LS1.
Then, I said how I liked reading through his blog post. I liked how you put so much detail in your template.
Lastly, I asked a question about his work. What was interesting about your work.
I enjoyed commenting on Giovanni and I hope he replies back to my comment.
Kia Ora Hector,
ReplyDeleteA second quality comment!! Great job this one is also excellent and a great example of a positive, thoughtful and helpful comment. To step it up I would encourage asking more specific questions about the post like asking how they made their template, what was the hardest part, did they enjoy writing this post and if so why?
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Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates
Talofa Lava Zana
ReplyDeleteThis was my second comment of comment threading and Giovanni has graduated from prize giving yesterday.
I commented on Giovanni's blog post because he was Head Boy of this school.