Friday, 18 December 2020

Comment Threading | SLJ | #7

Today Zana from the SLJ team commented on my Insect art blog post.

Zana said Kia Ora Hector,

My name is Zana and I am a blog commenter from the Summer Learning Journey.

I thought the activity was very exciting as I love seeing everyone's creative and unique designs! Your insect looks awesome and looks just like a butterfly, you added the antennas, body and the big beautiful wings. The rocks you add to the wings look like the little spots you see on monarch butterflies.

I would like to know how you found all the materials for your insect and if your butterfly has a name?

Keep up the great work and I hope to see more of your posts over the summer.
Ngā mihi nui,
Zana Yates

I said Talofa Lava Zana

I found these materials during lunch and I wanted to make a butterfly. I had to use pebbles to hang the leaves on the paper



1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Hector

    My name is Shannon and I’m from the Summer Learning Journey.

    I really liked how you greeted Zana and answered her questions in your blog comment. You have begun a thread with your blog comment, and now ideally you need Zana to reply to your comment to keep the thread going. To do this, you need to follow up your reply by asking her a question.

    You could ask her to share a link to another great insect post, or maybe ask her what other insects people made?

    Also, don’t forget to end your comment with “Happy blogging’ and your name, so she can see immediately that you’re starting a conversation thread with you.

    Keep up the great work Hector.

    Ka kite anō,
    Shannon (SLJ)

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