Charlotte said Kia Ora Hector,
It’s Charlotte here, a commenter for the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey. I thought the work you have done on the ‘Rise Up’ task was great!
I think that song writing is such an amazing talent! The kids from Mangere College did such a great job making this song. What did you think of this song?
I also think that songs that rhyme are awesome! What made you choose Corona as the topic of your song?
If you want to get even more points for the Summer Learning Journey, you can give the ‘Step it up’ challenge for this activity a go! You can find this using this link, This requires you to create a screen castify of you speaking/singing the chorus you created.
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
Summer Learning Journey
Then I replied back Talofa Lava Charlotte
Thanks for the comment and this task reminded me of the Corona song from the Manaikalani film festival where a student from Tamaki College sang stay at home that is why I chose the topic about Corona.When I watched Mangere College's song that gave me an idea of a cool song. After that, I went on the Manaikalani website to see Tamaki College's song. When I watched the song over and over again, that gave me an idea of the Corona song.
I don't know why I chose to put in "It's just like Benjamin Franklin Inventing electricity" because it doesn't actually match the rest of the words, but I think I put it there just for it make to rhyme.
Next time I would start the step it up challenge.
Nga mihi nui
Hector
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Hello again Hector, this is Elle from SLJ.
ReplyDeleteWow, you have posted lots of awesome comment threads on your blog! It is so good to see you replying to the people who have commented on your posts. I’m sure they really appreciated hearing back from you - I know I definitely did!
Because you have been engaging in so many cool comment threads, it would be awesome to see you have a go at the “It’s Cool To Be Kind” activity on the SLJ blog! I have included a link to it here. Check out the video by Mrs Grant to see what you need to do.
I’ll check back later to see how you’re doing with this activity - I’m looking forward to seeing what comments you choose!
Mā te wā
Elle (SLJ)
Talofa Lava Elle
ReplyDeleteLong time no see. I am enjoying replying to your comments you guys have been sending about my blog posts because it helps me get feedback, so I could go back and fix things.
In class, after doing reading, writing, and maths we do can dos and one of our can dos is comment threading, so we are able to get comment threading fast and quick.
Nga mihi nui
Hector
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Tēnā koe Hector, it’s great to hear back from you.
DeleteThat is so awesome to hear that you enjoy the feedback and comments so much - we enjoy giving them! What is the most helpful or thoughtful piece of advice you’ve received so far?
That is so neat that you have “can do’s” once you’ve finished all of your tasks. What is your favourite subject? Mine was always writing because I liked poetry and making up stories.
Happy New Year Hector! Tau Hou hari!
- Elle (SLJ)
Talofa Lava Elle
ReplyDeleteThe most helpful and thoughtful piece of advice I recieved was from all of you guys because you guys have been sending lots of positive and kind comments to me and I am about to do my 11th comment threading blog post. Every time I reply back to your guys's comments, I always sign the comment threading form so that I could get bonus points.
I have lost count on how many times I have been signing the form. My favourite subject was writing and art.
In Australia, my kind teacher, Miss Kass, gives me positive feedback on my writing and when it is the ned of term, I would always get writing awards for writing my stories. My favourite one, was about "Harry Potter." A teacher came in to our class for 4 weeks. His name was Mr Cimmons, he and I loved the "Harry Potter" seires and pro wrestling. He said that he was a magic teacher in Hufflepuff. When he left he promised me he woukd come back from my birthday, but then we moved in NZ.
Nga mihi nui
Hector
Tau Hau hari
Kia ora Hector,
DeleteThat is so wonderful to hear! Being positive, thoughtful and helpful is so important for interacting online and I’m so pleased that you have incorporated this into your commenting too! Well done for keeping on top of the form as well.
Writing and art are such cool subjects! Also Harry Potter is one of my favourite book and movie series of all time, so I’m super stoked to hear that you would get awards for writing stories about it! That’s so special that your old teachers were so supportive and kind. Hufflepuffs are usually very kind aren’t they?
Thank you for your awesome replies and I hope you’ve had a great day.
Mā te wā,
Elle (SLJ)
Talofa Lava Elle
ReplyDeleteI have watched all of the movie series of Harry Potter and my favourite house is Gryffindor. What is your favourite house.
I don't know how Hufflepuffs are kind but I Gryffindor think is more kinder then Hufflepuffs. I hate Slytherin because it has the baddies like Draco, the unknown name you know who, luscious, and all sorts of baddies.
I am having a very, very good day because I broke my world record of eating 6 jam toasts.
Nga mihi nui
Hector
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DeleteTalofa lava Hector,
DeleteThat is so awesome to hear! Gryffindor's are pretty neat, aren't they? Is Gryffindor your favourite because they are brave, or because Harry Potter himself is in that house? Or both?
My favourite house is Ravenclaw, because they're known for being intelligent and motivated! Also, Luna Lovegood is a Ravenclaw, and I like that she doesn't mind being different and quirky.
Yes, Slytherin does have a bad reputation because of the people that have been in that house. But I don't think they were all bad people, because Professor Slughorn was a Slytherin and while he may have had his flaws, he was generally pretty kind! I wonder if Slytherin house encouraged them to be more evil, or if they were already like that to begin with?
Well done on breaking your world record! Did you get a bellyache afterwards? Jam is very sweet!
Mā te wā
Elle (SLJ)